Fastback Screenplay Notes
What you get:
- Electronic notes embedded in your PDF or Final Draft file that give you my “live” reactions as I read the script, simulating the experience of a story analyst reading your script. All notes are in your document, for your convenience, with highlighting for clarity.
- Is it working? Am I sucked in? Where is it not clear? Is the structure adhering to the Story Map? Who’s the audience?
- Notes will address the big topics (concept, genre, act structure, protagonist goals and sympathy, character development) as well as more detailed elements like format and word choice (your writing style and “voice” on the page).
- The final note in the document contains a Wrap-up in paragraph form (equivalent of 2-4 pages of typed notes) that covers the major strengths and concerns in your script, including a…
- Commercial Evaluation: How I see your script fitting into the marketplace and how you can best focus your story on a commercially proven genre and audience.
- 2 email follow-up questions.
Cost: $199
Note: At times, I am able to return Fastback notes on a Rush (2 weeks or under) at no extra charge. Please inquire and I’ll check my schedule.
