What you get:

  • 3-5 pages of typed notes on your feature-length screenplay (75-130 pages), sectioned into “big picture” notes on the concept, genre, protagonist, general structure and execution and “page notes” that highlight specific issues of clarity, format, style and your voice on the page.
  • Crucial feedback from a professional reader as I answer questions like… Is it working? Am I sucked in? Where is it not clear? Is the structure adhering to the Story Map? Who’s the audience? And more.
  • Commercial Evaluation: How I see your script fitting into the marketplace and how you can best focus your story on a commercially proven genre and audience.
  • 2 email follow-up questions.

Cost: $299

To inquire about availability… email me.


If you have a completed television pilot script you’d like me to look at, see the TV Pilot Consultation.