The Fantastic Four screenplay

The Fantastic Four and Superman: A Tale of Two Babies by @storymapsdan

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The Fantastic Four screenplay

A Bundle of Joy and a Dumptruck full of Doodads:
The Fantastic Four steps on Superman

by Daniel Calvisi

 It’s all about that “core” conflict

It’s late summer 2025 and the two big superhero movies of the season have come out: Superman from DC and The Fantastic Four: First Steps from Marvel. At the box-office, the films had very similar domestic and international openings, but it’s clear Superman is having more staying power at the cinema.

That’s too bad, because, creatively, I believe Fantastic Four is a much better film than Superman, and its success began with a foundation of solid writing choices (ironic, considering that Superman had one writer and Fantastic Four had several writers and even went through an arbitration process to decide final credits). Both films are visually stunning, but it’s the story and characters that make Fantastic Four stand out to me.

I must admit, I wasn’t always this bully on the prospect of a new FF movie. In the run-up to the release, I definitely had my doubts. I was worried about reports that we wouldn’t see their origin but rather join the FF already in action as a successful world-saving superhero team. I was worried about the retro-style and the story being set in an alternate universe outside of the core MCU films. But mostly, I was flummoxed as to why they were including Sue Storm’s pregnancy so early in the saga. In the original comics by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby, she doesn’t become pregnant with Franklin Richards until years into the run. It seemed like the perfect ending to this film would be Sue saying “I’m pregnant.” Cut to credits.

Oh boy, was I wrong to worry. The baby was the BEST thing that could have happened to this film. Not only was it unique to have a superhero movie revolve around a pregnancy, but the brilliant “core” conflict of the film is built around it, and this core conflict is the greatest strength of The Fantastic Four: First Steps. Everything else is window dressing. Read more

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10 Takeaways from 4 Horror Producers by Daniel Calvisi

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Final Draft: Bloodlines screenplay

TEN TAKEAWAYS from a HORROR WORKSHOP
with FOUR WORKING PRODUCERS

By Daniel Calvisi

I recently completed the inaugural run of my “Story Maps Horror & Thriller Seminar,” a 4-week course wherein I guided a small group of screenwriters to develop original concepts for films and television series in the hottest genres in entertainment. Along the way, I brought in four guest speakers, industry veterans with credits including Final Destination, Cabin Fever, The Manor, Blumhouse, Netflix, Amazon and Lifetime’s “At 17” franchise. These producers, most of whom are also writers and directors, gave multiple rounds of notes on my students’ loglines and provided invaluable bits of insight in exclusive Zoom sessions that touched on craft and career.

Below, I’ve gathered some of the best pearls of wisdom they shared with us. If these lessons intrigue you and you’re interested in developing your own dynamic concept for a genre film, we will be running the course again so click here to check on dates and availability.

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‘Yes, And’-ing Your Story: The Sixth Sense by Daniel Calvisi

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Let’s do some more “Yes, and’ing” of movie stories, shall we? This time, I’ve looked at a screenplay that I originally covered on the job as a professional Reader, then watched it sell in a huge $3+ million deal for M. Night Shyamalan to write and direct the film that not only went on to become a huge hit, but at the time it became the biggest horror film to date and even broke into the top ten of biggest box-office hits in history (not adjusted for inflation). You know it, you love it.

The Sixth Sense. Read more

‘Yes, And’-ing your story: The Hunger Games by Daniel Calvisi

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When watching a movie or TV show, I’m always thinking about how and why a story works, and how and why the writer made those particular story choices. I’m also intrigued by how the concept began. How small was the kernel of the idea when they began to formulate the story and how did they go about expanding on the original premise to populate their world and find the protagonist’s ultimate journey?

I had the thought that the ol’ Improv 101 method of “Yes, and” could make for a great method to build a story from the first bud of an idea. At least, to get it started. This would probably work best with a writing partner or a group as you talk aloud and just keep the conversation and ideas going, but you can also do it on your own. (I also call this method “concept stacking” because it’s a process of adding new elements on top of an original premise.) Read more

Screenplay Structure

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Learn How To Write A Screenplay

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How To Write A Movie Script

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How To Submit A Screenplay Format

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How To Write A Screenplay For A Movie

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How To Write A Screenplay Script

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