Reader Reviews of Story Maps screenwriting book

“Daniel Calvisi’s Story Maps: How to Write a GREAT Screenplay
is readable, insightful and exciting.
It focuses on the hard work and narrative strategies
the screenwriter needs to adopt to write a
commercially viable screenplay, and is up to date
and strategic in the clearest way. Dan’s book will help you
do what you must do to succeed with your screenplay.”
-Ken Dancyger, Professor of Film at NYU’s Kanbar Institute of
Film and Television and best-selling Author of
Broadcast Writing, Alternative Scriptwriting,
The Technique of Film and Video Editing
and
Writing the Short Film (Focal Press)

“There is a lot of great advice here…
Most important, as I read Calvisi’s Story Maps,
I was inspired to rethink my current project.
And that’s what it’s all about, right?”

-Script Magazine

“”Writing a great screenplay is not easy. Dan has created a book that is straightforward and full of valuable insight and guidance for screenwriters at different experience levels. This book provides a simple way to approach your idea or rewrite for maximum results…and helpful to evaluate your work in whatever stage it’s at so you can make necessary improvements that will allow your unique story and vision to shine!”
-Laurie Lamson, co-editor Now Write! Screenwriting

“In truth, I found this book to be brilliant. [But] please don’t think the book is composed only of structural templates. It’s not, and I don’t want anyone to not buy the book because they have that expectation. Story Maps gives you excerpts from actual screenplays, showing you the format and language on the page in use by pro screenwriters. Any book that gives lessons in the skill of blowing the reader away is a book writers need to read. From the Introduction to Dan’s closing, “Good luck and Happy Writing,” Story Maps delivers. Imagine sitting around a coffee shop or a bar and talking one-on-one to a movie-writing, storytelling pro like Dan Calvisi. A no-holds barred, no frills, tell-it-like-it-really-is, no sugar-coating conversation. That’s what reading this book is like.”
-Best-selling author Joan Reeves, Slingwords review

“Just finished your book. Loved it! Should be required reading in every film school.”
Daniel Fazel, sold screenwriter and VFX Artist (Alice in Wonderland, Benjamin Button, Speed Racer, I Robot)

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“I’ve read numerous books on screenwriting, story and structure but none come close to Dan Calvisi’s Story Maps – Calvisi simplifies structure, the principals of screenwriting and offers ‘real world’ insight into the profession. Put it simply – this book is a MUST for all screenwriters… Dan, I’ve referred it to some colleagues, produced writers who can certainly use your mapping techniques. Keep up the good work!”
Michael Adante Writer/Director (Vanished, The Line)

“I’ve read your book, and can honestly say it’s one of the best. I’ve read a lot of them, and I’m in the camp that likes to know what I don’t know, so that I can work towards something, all the time trying to listen to one’s instinct or gut on story decisions … [Your method] resonates with what others say, but is so crystal clear, and defined that it’s actually refreshingly simple. I agree also with your analysis of what makes a good screenwriting teacher. Your experience…is perfect. You’ve read, reviewed, recommended/rejected countless scripts, unlike many of the gurus. You know how good scripts work. Congratulations on the excellent and extremely useful book. I’m about to re-read it so I have a thorough grasp, and apply it to my new script, and I’m very happy (and flattered) to write this testimonial.”
-Steve Isles Director/Producer, Authentic Films & Composer (Guy Ritchie’s RockNRolla)

“Calvisi’s Story Maps is a brilliant example of what every aspiring screenwriter needs to know about  the art of writing screenplays. Dan has a  no-nonsense approach to screenplay analysis that cuts through the bull and delivers the goods. A must read for serious screenwriters.”
J. Stephen Maunder, writer/director (Tiger Claws I, II, III, The Veteran, Shadows in Paradise)

“Dan’s Story Maps e-book is an essential tool for screenwriters at all levels, providing invaluable insight into the architecture of screenwriting.  The maps of produced films are great, especially his discovery of the ‘sweet spots’ for story turns, and learning the structure that Calvisi illustrates is something all writers should have engrained into their nature as creatives, before they type that first FADE IN.”
-Paul Van Carter, screenwriter, Lenny McLean [Hollywood Reporter]

“Your book is by far the best one on the topic that my wife and I have seen. My background is academic writing. I have written several books and many papers in the area of philosophy of education. I can say with some expertise, you are a natural teacher. The essence of good teaching is giving direction to tendencies already present. Anyone who already has the urge, drive, or passion to write screenplays cannot find better direction than that presented in Dan Calvisi’s Story Maps.”
-Jerome Popp, Professor Emeritus

“I call myself a writer (that is, I’m working on my first novel), and only half way through “Story Maps” I found myself restructuring parts of my own story; elements, scenes and other sections that I subconsciously knew were in need of help. So, before I’ve even finished reading this book, it’s already given aspects of my own writing a much needed boost, and has re-invigorated my novel in my mind. “Story Maps” is aimed at screenwriters, obviously, but there’s no reason why Mr Calvisi’s ideas and sincere advice cannot be applied to other forms of storytelling. A story is a story by any other name, after all.”
-Ben Roberts

“Dan has written an excellent book. I’ve used his Story Maps method to break down countless films and it’s definitely helped me improve my craft. Highly recommend!!!”
-Rob H.

“I vowed I’d never look at another story map/plot plan/paradigm etc. again because they seem to throw me in a different direction each time I read one. But your examples guided rather than confined me, so I broke my own rule.”
-Beverley M.

“Dan’s background as a reader for major studios and production companies as well as a working screenwriter makes his approach unique. Instead of theories and overly complex concepts, STORY MAPS is just that: A simple map to follow to create YOUR story in a professional and marketable way. Clearing the major hurdle of readers is a must to get to a greenlight. I will be referring back to this book for future projects as well and happy to have it on my eBookshelf.”
-Stephen Hoover

“I’m an actual screenwriter who on a daily basis uses Dan’s Story Map for my spec scripts, hired book-to-script adaptations and other literary projects.  By using his maps I’m able to see potholes in my stories before starting the actual writing of the scripts, which is a beautiful thing because of the time, energy and effort saved by avoiding such pitfalls as logical errors, poor scene placement, character growth (development) throughout the script and absence of scene subtext. This book is filled with useful information any writer, regardless of skill level, can benefit from. And perhaps the most practicable information this book has is the detailed maps of previously produced and released films. Maybe you’re stuck on what your main character’s Fatal Flaw should be. You can refer to these sample maps, see what type of Fatal Flaws the characters in their movies had, and generate a Fatal Flaw for your character. The information in this book is a steal. The price is a steal. What you will take away from it and achieve as a writer will be a steal. Heck, it might even be a robbery years down the road when your script gets produced and grosses $500 million at the BO.”
-Maurice Vaughn

“Thank you for sending the e-book so promptly!  It looks great in Kindle on my Ipad.”
-Russ K.

“Really love your books.  I pretty much have every type of screenwriting book out there.”
-Phil C.

“I’ve read Story by McKee and a few other books etc. and they are very helpful but I’ve been trying to write for a while and always get stuck when it comes to moving things forward past the first few scenes.  I always said to myself, Can’t someone just break down a movie in bullet point format so I can see how the thing is supposed to progress – much like writing a memo – so I can visualize the structure better? You’ve done that and that’s what led to the purchase.”
-Ramesh G.

“I looked for something analytical and concise about screenplay structure without the You can do it and be reeeeally creative if you get in touch with your inner self stuff. [I wanted] something about mapping out the story and… voila!… your web site. I thought, ‘I’d better give your book a try.'”
-Ina K.

“I have studied dozens of screenwriting books and I can say without any doubt that Story Maps is definitely within the top 3 of the books that most inspired me.”
-Alberto R.

“It’s way deeper than Save the Cat and other story mapping techniques I’ve read. I’m currently re-booting my latest script with Dan’s technique. Finally, things are flowing and hitting the mark. A must for beginners and pros.”
-Randy M.

“Metaphorically speaking, Dan is a great Swordsman who knows, like Indiana Jones, how and when just to use a gun instead of fancy martial arts to make a point!”
-C.J. Dean

“I stumbled upon your site as I was searching for different methods to write a screenplay. I have to say that I really like your method and look forward to applying it to my current project.  I have written before but never a screenplay.  My fiancee is a cinematographer and he pitched a story and believes I can write a great screenplay for it.  Hopefully, with this I can. Thanks again!”
-J.B.

“To be able to read something before committing to buy…is the greatest marketing technique for e-books. (And why I also bought a Kindle) . I notice you let people read excerpts from your book at your website (which is great).”
-Ralph L.

“One of the most practical guides that I have seen, and I’m not just “KILLING YOU WITH KINDNESS (AND/OR STROKING YOUR EGO)” to take a page from your book! Most books or online info is just the same stuff rehashed and packaged in a different cover. I can actually use this stuff and apply it to my work. Looking forward to sending you some questions. Thanks.”
-Matthew M.

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About the Author

Dan Calvisi author 'Story Maps'Daniel P. Calvisi is a script doctor, writing coach and a former Story Analyst for major studios like Twentieth Century Fox, Miramax Films and New Line Cinema. He is the author of Story Maps: How to Write a GREAT ScreenplayStory Maps: TV Drama: The Structure of the One-Hour Television PilotStory Maps: 12 Great Screenplays, and Story Maps: The Films of Christopher Nolan. He coaches writers, teaches webinars on writing for film and television and speaks at writing conferences. Many of his clients have worked with the top networks and studios in the industry, such as HBO, Warner Brothers, Disney, Sony, ABC, CBS, Showtime, Apple TV+, Netflix and more. He has been endorsed by Script magazine, featured on Indie Film Hustle, Film Courage and L.A. Screenwriter, and contributed to Now Write! Screenwriting. He holds a degree in Film and Television from New York University. He lives in Los Angeles.

Learn more about his books and services.

Miles and Jack in the modern "buddy comedy" Sideways

Rex Pickett interview (Sideways, Vertical)

Rex Pickett, author of the novel Sideways

Author Rex Pickett. Photo: rexpickett.com

I met Rex Pickett, the author of the novel Sideways that inspired the beloved film, at a showing of Sideways: the Play, which is currently playing at the Ruskin Group Theatre in Santa Monica, CA.

We spoke over a glass of Pinot (yes, the wine comes with your ticket, which is already surprisingly affordable for live theater), and he was very gracious with his time, even though he was no doubt answering the same questions about the movie that he’s fielded dozens of times. Most of all, he came across as an uncensored, uncompromising artist with no fear of burning any bridges — he shoots from the hip because he has to — that’s just his personality and he doesn’t compromise.

I knew I had to get him on my blog. Read more

INDIE FILM Interview: Small, Beautifully Moving Parts

Small, Beautifully Moving Parts, written and directed by Annie J. Howell and Lisa Robinson and starring Anna Margaret Hollyman, is fast on its way to becoming an indie film success story. The film began as a low-budget web series shot in New York City that was optioned by the Sundance Channel, and, a few years later, the creative team decided to expand it into a feature. Now, the completed film has received glowing praise from many top publications, including Roger Ebert, who writes about the film: “Effortlessly engaging … this is a small film and knows exactly how to be a small film. Like many New Yorker short stories, its purpose is to strike a particular note and allow it to reverberate.” Read more

Podcast

Welcome to the Story Maps Screenwriting Podcast, brought to you by Daniel Calvisi, author of Story Maps: How to Write a GREAT Screenplay and Story Maps: TV Drama: The Structure of the One-Hour TV Pilot. Daniel created this podcast with William Robert Rich, originally to explore their mutual passion for the films of director Christopher Nolan, which resulted in their book, Story Maps: The Films of Christopher Nolan, the most exhaustive story analysis of Christopher Nolan’s biggest films you can find.

Then Dan teamed up with Steve Lam to talk about superhero movies.

But, alas, this podcast is no more. Or maybe it’s just on hold for now. Whatever the case, you can no longer stream the audio episodes on iTunes or elsewhere. 🙁

But don’t despair, a few still survive on Dan’s Youtube channel in a playlist titled “Superhero Movie Analysis and Discussions.”

All of the original links to the podcasts are kept in the sidebar for your perusal, as some of them contain hyperlinks to compelling content.

Good Luck and Happy Writing,

Dan Calvisi

p.s. The best way to delve deep into the Story Map method of narrative construction and deconstruction is to read one of the Story Maps e-books, sold here in hi-res PDF format, which works on all platforms and readers:

 

 

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The Human Race indie horror film needs your help (Kickstarter)

Dear friends,
My friend, former NYU Film classmate and award-winning filmmaker Paul Hough is looking for audio finishing funds for his smart Horror/Sci-Fi feature THE HUMAN RACE before it premieres at the FANTASIA FILM FESTIVAL in Montreal in July (Tarantino’s North American premiere of Inglorious Basterds was at this genre festival; it’s a huge platform for an indie horror film and an honor to be accepted).

See footage from the film and a testimonial by its star, one-legged actor EDDIE McGEE, at the link below. The film features a number of disabled actors, so in that sense it’s breaking down some barriers. But above all, it’s just a bad-ass horror movie with a really cool concept that is sure to find a cult audience. Read more

Story Maps Podcast #1: Batman Begins (Free Story Map download)

The inaugural episode of the STORY MAPS SCREENWRITING PODCAST is here!

Listen to
the Story Maps Screenwriting Podcast #1:
Batman Begins
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Batman Begins
Story Map

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THEME: Mad Men Season 5

"The Other Woman"

As per usual, we’ve been diligently watching each episode of the current season of Mad Men and loving every minute of it. In my household, one must respect the golden rule…

In Weiner we trust. Read more

HORROR: Interview with LOVELY MOLLY screenwriter Jamie Nash

Jamie Nash is a working screenwriter who lives in Maryland and primarily writes genre films — horror, supernatural, fantasy, etc. He has a strong working relationship with Eduardo Sánchez, co-director of The Blair Witch Project — they have collaborated on a number of projects — the films Altered, Seventh Moon and Exists, and the comedy web series ParaAbnormal.

Jamie and Ed’s latest film is Lovely Molly, an intense horror thriller about the possession of a young woman told via a mix of standard narrative and “found” footage. The film is currently in theaters in a limited release, after playing the Toronto International Film Festival (TIFF) and South by Southwest film festival. There is a wider release planned for the UK and it will go to VOD and DVD in August. Read more

COMEDY: Chris Parnell on screenwriting (Archer, SNL, Suburgatory, Lazy Sunday 2, Anchorman)


Poop mouth

Chris Parnell is a veteran comedic actor who honed his skills in The Groundlings and on Saturday Night Live, before moving to films like Anchorman and Hot Rod. Lately, he’s appeared in 21 Jump Street, The Five-Year Engagement and he’s a regular cast member on the sitcoms Suburgatory and Archer. Those two shows had already finished for the season when Parnell popped up on the season finale of Saturday Night Live (Kristen Wiig’s final episode) in the sequel to one of the great viral videos of all time, Lazy Sunday 2. Read more

The Dark Knight Rises Pre-Cog Story Map or “How I would write the Dark Knight Rises screenplay”

The Dark Knight Rises Script

In anticipation of The Dark Knight Rises opening in theaters on July 20, I’ve been analyzing Christopher Nolan’s films, especially the first two chapters in his Batman trilogy, Batman Begins and The Dark Knight. I’ve found myself buried so deep into Nolan’s complex story structures that it’s been impossible for me to watch the trailers and not start mapping the story in my head. It’s been keeping me up at night. Even before this latest one, The Dark Knight Rises – Official Trailer #3 [HD], I started to write a Full Story Map for The Dark Knight Rises, sight unseen, based solely on the limited clips and information available on the web.

There’s a lot of speculation online as to the story, but no one has attempted to break down the entire film.

Until now. Read more

Mad Men Images | Mad Men 501-502 “A Little Kiss”

Anyone who knows me knows I’m a huge, huge, huge fan of Mad Men. After each episode, I comb the web for any and all Mad Men-related material, and since there’s many other nutjobs out there who are also mad for Mad Men, the blogosphere never disappoints.

But most high-profile sites only feature one still photo from each episode, and since I’m on the AMC press list and have access to various publicity materials, I decided I’d work harder to bring you guys more images for your scrapbooks, including ones you might not see anywhere else yet (like the pic above). Read more

The Hunger Games story could only be written by a woman?

I’m almost done reading The Hunger Games trilogy of books on my trusty Kindle and I’m seeing the movie in a few hours (as it unleashes a Quarter Quell on the box-office in its opening weekend), so until I can offer an analysis of the screenplay or movie, I thought I’d share one of my first impressions of the story when I read the book. Read more

Andrew Stanton on Story

I came across this TED talk by writer/director Andrew Stanton, whose credits include Toy Story 1-3, Finding Nemo, Wall-E and the upcoming John Carter. He’s got some really interesting things to say about the emotional connection between screenwriter (storyteller) and audience (listener), touching on WHY we love a great story, what we expect and how the storyteller should meet these expectations. Read more

E-Book Conversion and Marketing Specialist

Looking for someone to convert your book and get it online so all of those Kindle and iPad readers can buy it?

You’ve spent so much time writing your book, do you really have the energy and technical acumen to master your text file into multiple formats and launch an online marketing campaign tailored to your unique content and target audience?

When I finished the first draft of my e-book, Story Maps: How to Write a GREAT Screenplay, in Microsoft Word, I made the decision to learn the entire process for converting it to an e-book and selling it online. I can tell you honestly that I had no idea how much work was involved! If only I had a dollar for every time I wished I had just paid someone to do it for me (I would have about 500 bucks). The learning curve on this process is quite large, and there are many different applications and websites to master before you can reach the largest audience on the web. By the time I got around to my next full-length book, Story Maps: TV Drama, currently my best selling title, the process was much easier.

I currently have multiple e-books for sale in different formats on the most highly trafficked e-commerce sites on the web, and they are selling well. I’m turning a very good profit, and I can teach you how to do the same…or I can just do it all for you.

Firstly, just to show you that I’m legit and how complicated this can all be, here’s several links to show you my web presence for my book and marketing efforts:

My book on Kindle (Amazon)
My book on BarnesandNoble.com

My blog
Book review on Script Magazine
My Book Facebook Page
My Youtube Channel

All of those links represent A LOT of work.

Here are the services I can provide:

Copy-editing, layout and project supervision of the cheapest and most efficient way to get a professional designed book cover.

  • How to purchase ISBNs for your books.
  • How to commission professional cover art for a reasonable price.
  • How to edit your paperback and e-book files so they match up.
  • How to upload your book files to the top e-commerce sites (or I can do it for you).

1. Edit and convert your manuscript into the various e-book formats:

  • Kindle (.mobi) for the Amazon Kindle reader
  • iBooks (.epub) for iPad, iPhone and Mac computers
  • Nook (.epub) for the Barnes & Noble Nook reader and Kobo
  • PDF (.pdf) for all computers, best for printing
  • Html (.htm) for any web browser

2. Distribute your e-book files to the most popular e-commerce sites, including:

  • Amazon Kindle Store
  • Apple books
  • Barnes & Noble
  • Kobo

3. Design your Social Media footprint:

  • Build your presence on Facebook, X (Twitter), TikTok, Instagram, LinkedIn, Goodreads, YouTube, etc.

4. Train you on how to implement your social media campaign:

  • Establish and gain subs to your Newsletter
  • Design and buy Ads on multiple platforms
  • Shoot and upload Videos to your socials

Please feel free to CONTACT me with any questions and we’ll get the conversation going. I hope I can help you achieve your publishing goals.

Sincerely,

Daniel Calvisi

 

Fox Searchlight proves that audiences want original stories

A few months back, I was preparing a proposal that listed the box-office performance of several films, including The King’s Speech. I knew that the film did quite well, but I was shocked to learn that it grossed a whopping $440 million worldwide! To put that into perspective, this quiet, character-driven period drama with stuffy British accents outgrossed Tron: Legacy, Star Trek (2009) and The Adventures of TinTin! Read more

Seven screenplay analysis and free download offer

What’s in the box?!

Seven, written by Andrew Kevin Walker and directed by David Fincher, is one of the great thrillers of the 1990s, a decade with several exceptional thrillers. Walker’s screenplay for Seven shot him to the Script Doctor A-list, establishing him as a hot writer of dark material on spec, like 1999’s 8mm, as well as garnering him uncredited rewrites on films such as Fight Club, The Game (also Fincher-directed films) and Stir of Echoes (directed by Walker’s mentor, David Koepp). Read more

The Black List 2011 highlights the best spec screenplays of the year

The 2011 Black List is here! Congratulations to all of the writers who made the list.

For those who don’t know, the Black List compiles the “most liked” unproduced (as of voting time) screenplays of the year, as voted on by studio, agency and production company executives in Hollywood. What began as an underground project has become a major announcement for the development community that is reported on by sources such as The Hollywood Reporter.

Past winners like Juno and The Social Network have proven the list as a prescient judge of quality film storytelling. Read more

Download free Oscar screenplays

The major studios are once again posting their “For Consideration” screenplays online for Academy Award season. Some of these titles may become Oscar nominated screenplays, for Best Original Screenplay or Best Adapted Screenplay. So far, we’ve got free pdf script downloads from Universal, Fox Searchlight, Focus and Lionsgate. Read more

The Future of 3D with Peter Jackson, The Hobbit, Martin Scorsese and Hugo

This behind-the-scenes video on the set of The Hobbit in New Zealand is a must-see for 3D lovers and haters, alike. If you’re doubting the need for 3D (like Roger Ebert) or if you’re a Tolkien purist who thinks the two-part Hobbit saga is a calculated cash grab, I ask you to watch this video because it really shows how much the dedicated filmmakers behind films like this are melding artistry and brilliant technology to create a truly unique cinematic experience.

If Roger Ebert thought his letter from Walter Murch (see the link above) closed the case against 3D, I’d say this video tears the letter and the envelope it came in to shreds. Read more